Bok Vanoy
Monday, August 8, 2011
Is this a good beginning for my story?
Yeah, that's a really good beginning, maybe you should make it a little bit longer, but that depends on how long your story is going to be, because she has already blacked out so wouldn't you start a new paragraph/chapter? ;) But anyway its good ^-^
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